tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post7329447375374659993..comments2023-03-22T16:00:30.119-07:00Comments on English 2367 Writing Blog: Profile Practice: Katie ShowerMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-40182312079747710792016-10-03T12:28:53.541-07:002016-10-03T12:28:53.541-07:00Reading this profile as someone who knew her befor...Reading this profile as someone who knew her before college, its incredible how well she shines through. I honestly love how well you were able to show her personality through yours. KATIE, IT WAS GREAT!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10742392674758996951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-13135266721398862532016-10-03T12:28:46.106-07:002016-10-03T12:28:46.106-07:00I like how you described Alexis's reactions to...I like how you described Alexis's reactions to your interview questions, it gives a good illustration of what the interview was like. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00790734931509285196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-24227284946710984792016-10-03T12:27:37.685-07:002016-10-03T12:27:37.685-07:00Good job at keeping your profile informative and e...Good job at keeping your profile informative and entertaining as well. 80 hours a week sounds awful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04236531958904573404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-5387270843543410162016-10-03T12:27:29.591-07:002016-10-03T12:27:29.591-07:00Good job at keeping your profile informative and e...Good job at keeping your profile informative and entertaining as well. 80 hours a week sounds awful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04236531958904573404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-44508490378416549422016-10-03T12:19:52.024-07:002016-10-03T12:19:52.024-07:00You did an excellent job of describing Alexis, esp...You did an excellent job of describing Alexis, especially with her behavior when it came to answering questions. It was almost as if I could see her thinking deeply about the question before answering it.Seth Wickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02723415443606339529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-16975169779633035822016-10-03T12:16:18.755-07:002016-10-03T12:16:18.755-07:00Reading Alexis' profile has given me a new res...Reading Alexis' profile has given me a new respect for her. Factory work is not easy, and anyone who can do it is exceptionally strong willed. I also loved how Katie phrased Alexis' answers about her influences--the writing was great and made them seem very sincere.Sam Younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00819340588980117113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-20448980983363123122016-10-03T12:13:01.551-07:002016-10-03T12:13:01.551-07:00Katie, you did a really good job keeping this prof...Katie, you did a really good job keeping this profile in third person! When I was reading this, I could imagine it very well. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10110109496452851040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6897844715805410130.post-58138466803361975222016-10-03T12:11:48.079-07:002016-10-03T12:11:48.079-07:00"She got quiet for a second and you could see..."She got quiet for a second and you could see her think long and hard for a second." This sentence that you used really helped to set the scene; loved it.Regina Wedgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15307380240443800040noreply@blogger.com